My employer assigned me to do some work with a small Self-storage company’s website. They wanted a single landing page that would link to their new CRM system.
I thought their original design looked perfectly fine but I decided to try ‘fine-tuning’ some of the rough edges.
Awesome, firstly thanks for sharing, and asking for peoples feedback, it’s always tricky when someone asks you to redo a website, I would encourage you not to feel locked into the original, unless that was the brief you were given (the colour palette seems a little gloomy to me).
My preference (everyone is different) is I would put the company details just before the map and focus on the Storage solutions at the top.
I realise you are still working on it, here are a couple of things I found (and you probably already know about them… )
There seems to be some errors when you scroll to the very bottom of the page.
I would do some call to action buttons on the slider, the slider goes to quick to read all the text then I have to find it on the page. (this could be a limitation on the bric your using?)
Thanks so much for the Feedback. I really do want to play with the color palette if it doesn’t cause any issues with their marketing design.
I’m not sure where that company detail bloc should go but I’ll make sure to ask my boss and the clients
Those errors are appearing on my portfolio site leading me to believe that there is something going on with my SSL certificate. Do you by chance have an adblocker enabled?
The other adjustments you pointed out have been made and I’ve just made their new logo.